My Thesis Statement and Outline.

Thesis: Planet green and click for obama both deal with pre-eminent topics in current life, and although they successfully portray them; their lack of effective PR limits their ability to reach a substancial audience, like the 18-24 year old range group capable of making a difference in our environment together with the upcoming election.

Outline:
Define The video games:
A. Planet Green=Educative/persuasive video game
B. Click for Obama=Persuasive/educative game
1)How their individual classifications affect their PR, thus their audience appeal

Reinforce my claim{with evidence}:
A. Planet Green's PR faults
B. Click for Obama's PR faults
C. Compare both/how they can be fix

Describe and Define the audience:
A. Bring about whats necessary to reach this audience.
B. The game as it relates to its players

Conclusion:
A. Successfully assuring my claim with room for argument.
B. Effective ways to reach my desired audience its importance.

My Thesis Statement and Outline